Out of the Shadows Werewolf Wars Volume 1 Bethany Shaw Books
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Out of the Shadows Werewolf Wars Volume 1 Bethany Shaw Books
I can't believe so many people like this book. The plot is fine, although predictable, but there are many books out there like this, so that's not really a problem. One of the beefs I have with this book is the author seems to have written what she wanted in each scene, totally ignoring the fact that scenes have to make sense when viewed in sequence. For example, Lark gets to her bakery at 6 AM to open at 7 AM. How on Earth is this woman expected to do enough baking in ONE HOUR to have enough product so the cases have at least something in them at opening? It's ridiculous! And then her closing time is 8 PM. Can't see why a bakery would be open until 8 at night, but maybe they do things differently there. But then Lark has to drive home, jump in bed, and get up again early enough to get to the bakery at 6 AM. It's pretty much nuts. And to top it all off, we get to read about her doing office work, and her packing boxes with product, but we never read about her actually baking at all. This is like an episode of Bonaza, where the Cartwrights were either driving a wagon to town to see Sheriff Coffee, or sitting down to dinner cooked by Hop Sing. They were supposed to be ranchers, but they never did any ranch work to speak of.Second problem is silly use of vocabulary. For example, Lark likes the look of Devon's shoulders. So she likes the "girth" of his shoulders. No! She doesn't like the circumference of his shoulders! No one thinks about the "circumference" of someone's shoulders, they look at their width. You don't have to have the thesaurus open beside you to find a new way to describe something. This happened quite a bit in the book.
Final problem, and this one drives me crazy, is lip biting, biting the lips, chewing the lips. Constantly. I think this is supposed to mean the woman is thinking. She was even lip biting during a pasta dinner at a restaurant! How many of you have ever stopped and had a good lip biting session in the middle of dinner? You can convey a woman is thinking about something without having her chew her face off every few minutes. Sheesh. Romance writers use that idea a lot, and it's lazy writing.
Two stars is rather harsh, but the mistakes just kept coming. A good editor would go a long ways to making the book more readable.
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Out of the Shadows Werewolf Wars Volume 1 Bethany Shaw Books Reviews
I kind of feel like this is an unfinished book. Sure the main characters expressed their attraction throughout the book but the book ends with 'hey move in with me, I love you'. I really feel let down. Add in the fact that the actual writing is mediocre and the editing wasn't really great...
The story was a good one, but I just didn't connect with it enough to continue with the series.
An interesting story about two families of werewolf's in the south. Lark and Sarah Davies are humans who had lost their parents in a tragic car accident when they were younger. Their father was a physician and their mother was a stay at home mother. Rick Harris and his family lived on a horse ranch in Texas and when there were accidents Dr Davies would be the Doctor called since he knew their secret. This story starts with Devin Harris, his brother Vincent, his sister Emily and her fiancé Marcus. Devons stepfather has finally gone to far in his bid to dominate everyone and has bartered Emily to another pact though he knows that she does not want to. They are trying to escape to reach Texas and the safety of his uncle Rick in Texas. For fans of this type of reading this story has some interesting scenes.
The story line was good, so was the writing with the exception of a few editing misses.The story kept my interest. Why did I give only two stars then when I did enjoy the book. The book just ended, with no resolution to any of the issues brought forward in the book. Just Bam..done!. Some may call this a cliff hanger book or a "to be continued" . Definitely not a stand alone unless you like your ending with no resolutions. Apparently this is part of a series with resolution possibly in later books. Not sure. I usually read reviews before deciding on a book, I certainly must have missed any reviews stating it was a cliff hanger or that you need to read the rest of the series to get answers. Had that been mentioned in other reviews I read I would not have bothered beginning this book.
I can't believe so many people like this book. The plot is fine, although predictable, but there are many books out there like this, so that's not really a problem. One of the beefs I have with this book is the author seems to have written what she wanted in each scene, totally ignoring the fact that scenes have to make sense when viewed in sequence. For example, Lark gets to her bakery at 6 AM to open at 7 AM. How on Earth is this woman expected to do enough baking in ONE HOUR to have enough product so the cases have at least something in them at opening? It's ridiculous! And then her closing time is 8 PM. Can't see why a bakery would be open until 8 at night, but maybe they do things differently there. But then Lark has to drive home, jump in bed, and get up again early enough to get to the bakery at 6 AM. It's pretty much nuts. And to top it all off, we get to read about her doing office work, and her packing boxes with product, but we never read about her actually baking at all. This is like an episode of Bonaza, where the Cartwrights were either driving a wagon to town to see Sheriff Coffee, or sitting down to dinner cooked by Hop Sing. They were supposed to be ranchers, but they never did any ranch work to speak of.
Second problem is silly use of vocabulary. For example, Lark likes the look of Devon's shoulders. So she likes the "girth" of his shoulders. No! She doesn't like the circumference of his shoulders! No one thinks about the "circumference" of someone's shoulders, they look at their width. You don't have to have the thesaurus open beside you to find a new way to describe something. This happened quite a bit in the book.
Final problem, and this one drives me crazy, is lip biting, biting the lips, chewing the lips. Constantly. I think this is supposed to mean the woman is thinking. She was even lip biting during a pasta dinner at a restaurant! How many of you have ever stopped and had a good lip biting session in the middle of dinner? You can convey a woman is thinking about something without having her chew her face off every few minutes. Sheesh. Romance writers use that idea a lot, and it's lazy writing.
Two stars is rather harsh, but the mistakes just kept coming. A good editor would go a long ways to making the book more readable.
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